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April 6th

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Just an ordinary day for most
For me the day I lost the most
Most of my pain I lost
Gained someone I can not lose

For me the day I lost the most
Gained everything that means the most
Gained someone I can not lose
Someone I can openly talk to

Gained everything that means the most
Most of my pain I lost
Someone I can openly talk to
Just an ordinary day for most
A Pantoum structured poem. It's an oddly confusing repeating line structure with a penultimate third stanza that flips the irregular structure yet again. A perfect example of the annoying and confusing way my brain operates :)
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