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What's the Plan
At first,
A plan for me
That turned out not to be;
Instead a lesson for you to
Discover.
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Literature
Wants and Needs
I need
To be honest
About my feelings too
And this makes it difficult
With you
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Literature
Yet To Be Found
Alone
Walking this path
Never understanding
What is meant for me to believe
In life
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Literature
Passion and Suffering
In this world I have not much to show
To weave this story over time, take it slow
To be at peace; free from pain
Moving forward not in vain
Why do I feel that I've fallen so low?
So much to understand and know
Strike down all those that are foe
Trying my hardest to remain sane
In this world
My pains to carry are dues I owe
When will I be free to go?
Regret and guilt my past a stain
Trapped under the weight of this chain
From all this I can only hope to grow
In this world
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Literature
What Would You Do
It's me again, God.
It's been awhile, and I'm sorry about that. Though I speak to you everyday, it's been a bit where we got down to the nitty gritty.
The last time we talked like this, I was looking down the barrel of my rifle. I was angry that you had taken  away my friend, and was calling you a piece of shit for always trying my patience and faith as you do. How funny our relationship has always been.
Reminds me of that one time I was yelling at the sky that I hated you for the things that I must do. And the priest asked me why I hated you. To the confusion of the priest I explained I really had no idea what he was referring too since I held nothing in my heart but love for you.
Anyways, moving on my Heavenly Father, I know you have many things to do. So I'm at that point again, where I'm angry with the path you have chosen for me.
I just don't understand why I must stay here, why I must always carry this pain at the loss of everything else. I'm not questioning why I must conti
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Literature
Losses
When you think its ok
Finally start to feel again
Just stop let it go
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Literature
Are words just words
You bring color to my words
Soft shades of red, white, and pink
Ink upon paper; a dream occurs
You bring color to my words
Causing my mind to be a flutter, filled with thought stealing birds
Resistant to see what I can see; as these words interlink
You bring color to my words
Soft shades of red, white, and pink
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Literature
My Friends
I
Have friends
Who are great
Particularly
One of my friends though does greatly mean the most
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Literature
What you talking about
I want to tell the tales of days gone by
But feelings into words currently escape me
I was but some random guy
But my pain you saw and would not let it be
And with no real reason at all
You reached out and touched my heart across the sea
No matter what it was, you wouldn't let me fall
Honored I was to have your helping hand
Quickly did we lower our wall
A friendship blossomed, I watched it expand
Why me? Was all that I could ask myself
I have been trying to understand
Now happy with the changes in my mental health
Our relationship my treasured wealth
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Literature
April 6th
Just an ordinary day for most
For me the day I lost the most
Most of my pain I lost
Gained someone I can not lose
For me the day I lost the most
Gained everything that means the most
Gained someone I can not lose
Someone I can openly talk to
Gained everything that means the most
Most of my pain I lost
Someone I can openly talk to
Just an ordinary day for most
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Literature
Mita Kuuluu?
Tavallisesti kirjoittajan lohko on kauhea
Ei voi maalata mitään
Ei voi tehdä mitään
Ei voi kirjoittaa mitään
Mutta entä jos kirjoittajat estävät jotain hyvää?
Entä jos mikä häiritsee minua, oletko sinä?
Ajattele sinua koko ajan.
Mietitkö, herääkö jos olisit edelleen siellä.
Jos en herään, olisitteko vain ihmeteltävä, jos olen unohtanut sinut?
Niin monet kysymykset ja ajatukset pilkkovat mieleni.
Yritä olla nukkumassa liikaa, älä halua pelotella sinua.
Yritä olla antamatta paljon huomiota, mutta huomion on vain haluan antaa.
Yritä olla kohteliaasti, mutta minulla on vain hyviä sanoja.
Juuttunut keskelle elämäni ristiriitoja.
Tiedän, että haluat metsästää meren aarteita.
Maalaa, piirrä, lue, on paikalla teetä.
Rakastat sisaruksia, erinomaista suhdetta äitisi kanssa.
Tapaturmavakuutus, h
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Literature
A Visit To The Sea
The day just right; an early start,
The coast we should visit together,
At the rays of dawn; steals my heart.
Wave kissed winds bring pleasure,
Feet buried deep in the fresh sand,
The beach gives no displeasure.
To walk amongst it hand in hand,
Collecting treasures together;
Then swim in it, away from land.
Spend our day there till nightfall,
And then watch the sky under the sea,
Stars arrive with the nights call.
We could sit and watch what we see,
And listen to songs of the sea.
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Literature
The Meaning Of You
You are my creative writing on a page, the emotions it stirs in its readers,
The stories of future dreams yet to be created, tales left to be told;
What drives me to be better than my past, happy with the present, and scared but ecstatic of the future.
The emotion of the first fish caught as a young boy,
The fear of your first dance,
The pride of the first sports victory.
The relaxation after a days hard work.
You are the scent of fresh cut grass on a morning summer breeze,
The sensation of walking barefoot through the morning dew;
The laughter of friends tumbling down a hill,
The last star I count at night drifting into my slumber.
A mountain peak,
A sunset over a beach,
The symphony of natures voice;
Blooming flowers in a field.
The sip of a drink that hits just the right spot,
The praise of a job well done,
The fruits of my labor,
The strength to continue on.
I can keep going on; comparing all that represents what you mean,
You are everything that is good that life has to offer,
Eve
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Literature
Where is the love?
As I'm getting older I look back,
I look back to all that I've done right or wrong;
What could have been different, things I could have done.
The more we talk, the more I wish we could start over,
Before all my failures, the lost time;
Though young I've grown old,
When compared I have not achieved any real purpose.
In the past I danced,
I played a musical instrument,
I traveled the world over;
Why did I let myself go?
At what point did I lose sight of my future?
Was it when I realized I was no longer myself,
No it was before even then;
Before I realized it was not enough,
Not enough to be content with my present, but to earn the possibilities of my future.
Now I look at you, and see the possibilities...
But it's too late for me, so much wasted;
Where did all my time go, could I still have time to make you happy?
I'm past my expiration, I can only move forward with what I have;
And that, for you, may never be enough.
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Literature
Contemplations
How long has it been, our first chat,
Afraid it was only an act;
I thought at first you'd be mistaken,
Want to build on this foundation?
Back and forth we continue talks,
Sharing our personal and deep thoughts;
You are my aspiration,
Want to build on this foundation?
Learning of our fears and passions,
Worried about each others actions;
What is this fresh new sensation,
Want to build on this foundation?
Helping each other out so much,
Would courtship seemed to be rushed;
All of it through contemplation,
Want to build on this foundation?
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Literature
Summer Joys
Spring is on the windy breeze out,
In its place the golden time;
The heat will be here no doubt.
But with the heat comes summers chime,
Places to visit; azure lakes,
Charcoal aromas: its suppertime.
Time of adventures and mistakes,
Waves hitting shores, children's laughter;
Enjoying some cold icecream cakes.
Lost in moments, time goes faster;
Roadtrips, Camping, barefoot walks.
Nighttime skies are only one answer.
A good mead around burning logs,
A season of dance and good songs.
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At first,
A plan for me
That turned out not to be;
Instead a lesson for you to
Discover.
What's the Plan
Yet another Cinquain. I'm currently in a rut.
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I need
To be honest
About my feelings too
And this makes it difficult
With you
Wants and Needs
Another cinquain with syllable structure 2/4/6/8/2
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Alone
Walking this path
Never understanding
What is meant for me to believe
In life
Yet To Be Found
A Cinquain Structured poem 5 non-rhyming lines with a set syllable structure of 2/4/6/8/2
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In this world I have not much to show
To weave this story over time, take it slow
To be at peace; free from pain
Moving forward not in vain
Why do I feel that I've fallen so low?
So much to understand and know
Strike down all those that are foe
Trying my hardest to remain sane
In this world
My pains to carry are dues I owe
When will I be free to go?
Regret and guilt my past a stain
Trapped under the weight of this chain
From all this I can only hope to grow
In this world
Passion and Suffering
A rondeau structure 15 line rhyming structure with 2 refrains that are a word or phrase from the first verse represented by the capital A. Structure is
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It's me again, God.
It's been awhile, and I'm sorry about that. Though I speak to you everyday, it's been a bit where we got down to the nitty gritty.
The last time we talked like this, I was looking down the barrel of my rifle. I was angry that you had taken  away my friend, and was calling you a piece of shit for always trying my patience and faith as you do. How funny our relationship has always been.
Reminds me of that one time I was yelling at the sky that I hated you for the things that I must do. And the priest asked me why I hated you. To the confusion of the priest I explained I really had no idea what he was referring too since I held nothing in my heart but love for you.
Anyways, moving on my Heavenly Father, I know you have many things to do. So I'm at that point again, where I'm angry with the path you have chosen for me.
I just don't understand why I must stay here, why I must always carry this pain at the loss of everything else. I'm not questioning why I must continue, I fully understand the purpose, and I will continue happily the tasks you have provided. So many miracles you have shown me along my route, I wouldn't even be here if nought for you.
I just want to find my one friend, that one friend who'll make this worlds time easier. Alas, to want that which is only mortal, I really don't need. I was but momentarily lost, and as usual our conversation has brought a much needed calm. Forgive my indiscretions, my Lord.
I am only human, and it is wrong of me to challenge your omnipotent plan. Your warrior,
With your grace I shall continue forward, through Jesus; in his name: Amen
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Call me Grid. Im here to be here. I love literature of all types. I am a literature enthusiast. I also like to critique when the work inspires me just right! Feel free to help a guy out with networking, if you like it enough you can share/feature my work. Thank you for your time, keep up the good work, and one day may I come across your writings to enjoy
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