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Mita Kuuluu?
Tavallisesti kirjoittajan lohko on kauhea
Ei voi maalata mitään
Ei voi tehdä mitään
Ei voi kirjoittaa mitään
Mutta entä jos kirjoittajat estävät jotain hyvää?
Entä jos mikä häiritsee minua, oletko sinä?
Ajattele sinua koko ajan.
Mietitkö, herääkö jos olisit edelleen siellä.
Jos en herään, olisitteko vain ihmeteltävä, jos olen unohtanut sinut?
Niin monet kysymykset ja ajatukset pilkkovat mieleni.
Yritä olla nukkumassa liikaa, älä halua pelotella sinua.
Yritä olla antamatta paljon huomiota, mutta huomion on vain haluan antaa.
Yritä olla kohteliaasti, mutta minulla on vain hyviä sanoja.
Juuttunut keskelle elämäni ristiriitoja.
Tiedän, että haluat metsästää meren aarteita.
Maalaa, piirrä, lue, on paikalla teetä.
Rakastat sisaruksia, erinomaista suhdetta äitisi kanssa.
Tapaturmavakuutus, h
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Literature
A Visit To The Sea
The day just right; an early start,
The coast we should visit together,
At the rays of dawn; steals my heart.
Wave kissed winds bring pleasure,
Feet buried deep in the fresh sand,
The beach gives no displeasure.
To walk amongst it hand in hand,
Collecting treasures together;
Then swim in it, away from land.
Spend our day there till nightfall,
And then watch the sky under the sea,
Stars arrive with the nights call.
We could sit and watch what we see,
And listen to songs of the sea.
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Literature
The Meaning Of You
You are my creative writing on a page, the emotions it stirs in its readers,
The stories of future dreams yet to be created, tales left to be told;
What drives me to be better than my past, happy with the present, and scared but ecstatic of the future.
The emotion of the first fish caught as a young boy,
The fear of your first dance,
The pride of the first sports victory.
The relaxation after a days hard work.
You are the scent of fresh cut grass on a morning summer breeze,
The sensation of walking barefoot through the morning dew;
The laughter of friends tumbling down a hill,
The last star I count at night drifting into my slumber.
A mountain peak,
A sunset over a beach,
The symphony of natures voice;
Blooming flowers in a field.
The sip of a drink that hits just the right spot,
The praise of a job well done,
The fruits of my labor,
The strength to continue on.
I can keep going on; comparing all that represents what you mean,
You are everything that is good that life has to offer,
Eve
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Literature
Where is the love?
As I'm getting older I look back,
I look back to all that I've done right or wrong;
What could have been different, things I could have done.
The more we talk, the more I wish we could start over,
Before all my failures, the lost time;
Though young I've grown old,
When compared I have not achieved any real purpose.
In the past I danced,
I played a musical instrument,
I traveled the world over;
Why did I let myself go?
At what point did I lose sight of my future?
Was it when I realized I was no longer myself,
No it was before even then;
Before I realized it was not enough,
Not enough to be content with my present, but to earn the possibilities of my future.
Now I look at you, and see the possibilities...
But it's too late for me, so much wasted;
Where did all my time go, could I still have time to make you happy?
I'm past my expiration, I can only move forward with what I have;
And that, for you, may never be enough.
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Literature
Contemplations
How long has it been, our first chat,
Afraid it was only an act;
I thought at first you'd be mistaken,
Want to build on this foundation?
Back and forth we continue talks,
Sharing our personal and deep thoughts;
You are my aspiration,
Want to build on this foundation?
Learning of our fears and passions,
Worried about each others actions;
What is this fresh new sensation,
Want to build on this foundation?
Helping each other out so much,
Would courtship seemed to be rushed;
All of it through contemplation,
Want to build on this foundation?
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Literature
Summer Joys
Spring is on the windy breeze out,
In its place the golden time;
The heat will be here no doubt.
But with the heat comes summers chime,
Places to visit; azure lakes,
Charcoal aromas: its suppertime.
Time of adventures and mistakes,
Waves hitting shores, children's laughter;
Enjoying some cold icecream cakes.
Lost in moments, time goes faster;
Roadtrips, Camping, barefoot walks.
Nighttime skies are only one answer.
A good mead around burning logs,
A season of dance and good songs.
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Literature
Misconceptions
What is Love? Incorrectly strued,
Unconditional like family;
Relationships you've pursued.
Do you believe this fallacy?
Love is coffee made just right,
Happy joys of being with family;
A good book to sit with at night,
The path of dawns first breaking light,
Painting the morning dews first sight.
Love is all that life has right,
All too love is the greatest gift,
All that you love is worth the fight;
So everything you have wished,
Is unnoticed untill missed.
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Journal
Points Give away Closed
Just comment and I'll randomly choose commenters to give my points out too
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Literature
To Arms
The eerie calm wafting across the plains.
Smells of molten iron and gunpowder.
The murmuring of metal clad warriors marching to a singular goal.
The air is still, dread hangs triumph over the environment.
Each faction stands glaring across to each other.
The first to move loses? Or the last to respond?
The call is heard, the field erupts in an adrenaline filled frenzy.
Clanking and scrapping metals as the armored warriors charge forward.
Battle cries heard miles around as it reaches torrential levels.
The factions impact at the epicenter.
Steel against steel rings out.
Metal against metal, metal against flesh.
The scent of sweat and blood covers everything.
Lives scream out as they are taken early.
Glory to be found amongst the standing.
The air returns to an eerie calm.
As the dust settles who will be left.
Wars of the heart or mind are a trifling matter.
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Literature
Dark Waters
Up north there is a lake.
Water so clear it's crystal with tints of emerald.
Reflected green stones from the bottom.
Fish dancing amongst the rocky stars.
Up north there is a lake.
When visited all pains are washed away.
A view so clear you forget the troubles of topside.
At the bottom, its treasures glow brilliantly.
Up north there is a lake.
To drag your hand creating cleansing ripples of your soul.
A dip in its smooth waters rinses away deep sorrows.
A drink of its essence invigorating.
Up north there is a lake.
To leave is to remember the horrors of life.
As you watch the serenity leave behind you chaos awaits in front.
Why must I leave the emerald tinted crystal lake.
Up north there is a lake.
The decision to never leave has been made.
One final dive weighted by the worlds pressure.
Never to come up, now part of its exquisite scenery.
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Literature
Never Easy
Take this key, I don't offer lightly..
For it, with your hands; my heart to unlock
I couldn't promise everything; but try is what I could do.
It's been awhile since I felt this way,
The need to be someone's knight; their foundation on which to stand.
Couple
    Weeks
          Later
I'm still here; each day is new, battling your self esteem, your guilt.
Always the same problem, never the same fight.
I've adapted to you, a survival instinct I guess.
Are we making progress? Am I helping at all?
One
   Month
       Later
A new issue arises, an unusual amount of affection; tugging and pulling at me.
Wanting me to hold you, cuddle you, lay with you; I accept and do what I've promised.
My promise: to give my all to help, to never leave you alone; be there always when needed.
Second
    Month's
         Passing
I'm starting to feel trapped: between truth and lies.
The affection has caused me to
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Literature
The Truth
My muse granted me my art.
She filled my dreams and my heart,
Just a simple hello to start.
My very much needed counterpart;
My poems of love and happiness,
My muse helped craft her part.
She helped fight back my darkness;
She made it so I was not alone,
I grew a deep filled fondness.
Let everyone; to all be known,
My muse will never corrupt,
My muse is mine so get your own!
Even though my heart was once crushed,
Never did I want to give up..
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Literature
A Long Road
Nothing left to do
I have given my all
Now a shadow road
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Literature
A Day In My Life
Never can I get you out of my head.
The first thought of my day is of you; then I will check my phone.
No words from my love, back to the dreamland I go.
Words from you, my heart skips a beat.
The excitement equivalent to a child's first visit to an amusement park.
Eyes wide open; trying to take in everything, wanting to experience all the joys.
The sunrises; I think of you watching the sunrise.
Wanting to watch the start of the day with you.
Did I remember to say good morning, does it matter if I said good morning?
Will it matter to say good morning to you?
I wish for the day I can finally say good morning to you not through a message.
I want it to be true.
It's time to work; thinking of new project ideas.
Demanding the thought process is; distracted by thoughts of you on my mind.
Wondering if you think of me ever in your day to day.
Wondering If I am as important to you; devising ways to make you happy.
Work is done; Hard I work to provide.
Would you be proud of me if I worked so har
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Literature
If I Mean The Same
You are everything
If I'm equally important
What are you fearing?
I promised you the world
And the universe I will give
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Literature
First Encounters
First we met each other
The sun rose to meet us
The sky embraced us
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It is done. Thank you to all the participants. Now I'll be choosing the lucky winner over the next week. If you received points and would like to comment here to receive possible brownie points to win the main prize you may do so. (I know all who won points so sneaking a comment in won't help you win the main attraction) Good luck ;)
For all those participating in the comment contests. I have not forgotten you. Just have been moving. I will be going over stuff this evening and sending out points that are owed also. Thank you for understanding and participating
Tavallisesti kirjoittajan lohko on kauhea
Ei voi maalata mitään
Ei voi tehdä mitään
Ei voi kirjoittaa mitään
Mutta entä jos kirjoittajat estävät jotain hyvää?

Entä jos mikä häiritsee minua, oletko sinä?
Ajattele sinua koko ajan.
Mietitkö, herääkö jos olisit edelleen siellä.
Jos en herään, olisitteko vain ihmeteltävä, jos olen unohtanut sinut?

Niin monet kysymykset ja ajatukset pilkkovat mieleni.
Yritä olla nukkumassa liikaa, älä halua pelotella sinua.
Yritä olla antamatta paljon huomiota, mutta huomion on vain haluan antaa.
Yritä olla kohteliaasti, mutta minulla on vain hyviä sanoja.
Juuttunut keskelle elämäni ristiriitoja.

Tiedän, että haluat metsästää meren aarteita.
Maalaa, piirrä, lue, on paikalla teetä.
Rakastat sisaruksia, erinomaista suhdetta äitisi kanssa.
Tapaturmavakuutus, hieman kömpelö.
Voi sinä huoli niin, mutta se on hyvä huoli.

Haluan tietää enemmän kiinnostuksistasi, enemmän sisaruksistasi.
Haluan, että haluat tietää enemmän minusta.
Haluan, että sisaresi haluavat tietää enemmän minusta.
Haluan tietää enemmän alkuperäestänne.
Minun heikkouteni ei tiedä, ja ei tiedä sinusta on pahin tällä hetkellä.

Mutta kaikki tämä on vaikeaa.
Vaikea, koska se, joka olisi suojellut sinua, tuhosi sinut.
Vaikea, koska se, joka olisi rakastanut sinua, oli kiireinen täyttämällä pääsi valheilla.
Vaikea, koska se, joka olisi opettanut teille elämän oppitunteja ja näyttänyt teille, että teidän arvoasi joka toinen päivä, varmisti, että tunsit pahimman ja arvoton.
He tekivät tämän kokouksen vaikeaksi.

Heidän oli tarkoitus olla roolimalli, ja heitti sen sijaan näkemyksesi hyvistä miehistä siellä.
Minua häiritsee, mieleni on sameaa.
Voin vain kuvitella, oletko sinä, ja mitä aiot tehdä, jotta voidaan todistaa, että siellä on parempia miehiä.
Mita Kuuluu?
Meh forgive my horrible translation. I'm still not good at phrases and such. But I guess that is what happens when you try to directly translate English into another language... it's not fluent at all 😔
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It is done. Thank you to all the participants. Now I'll be choosing the lucky winner over the next week. If you received points and would like to comment here to receive possible brownie points to win the main prize you may do so. (I know all who won points so sneaking a comment in won't help you win the main attraction) Good luck ;)

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Call me Grid. Im here to be here. I love literature of all types. I am a literature enthusiast. I also like to critique when the work inspires me just right! Feel free to help a guy out with networking, if you like it enough you can share/feature my work. Thank you for your time, keep up the good work, and one day may I come across your writings to enjoy
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AffectiveBlast121 Featured By Owner May 6, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
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Thanks for the fav!! .D
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Kattsura Featured By Owner May 5, 2017
Thank you so much :)
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LualaDy Featured By Owner May 5, 2017   Traditional Artist
you're a sweetie
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J-Fluff Featured By Owner May 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh! Thank you so much for the points! <3
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gridtakno Featured By Owner May 4, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome
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Thank you for watching me. I appreciate the attention.
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gridtakno Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
De Nada :cowboy:
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